14.08: apply update based on Mark Nicholson's feedback14.08

Signed-off-by: Ryan Harkin <ryan.harkin@linaro.org>

5 files changed, 9 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt b/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
index c613c76..fd37448 100644
--- a/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
+++ b/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 h2. Linaro Android Engineering Build for Juno (Multi-arch 64-bit)
 
-You can find the latest ARM Member Build here:
+ARM's customers should use the latest ARM Member Build here:
 
 * "http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk":http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk
 
diff --git a/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt b/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
index 43f3521..9ccd06f 100644
--- a/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
+++ b/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 h2. Linaro Android Engineering Build for Juno (32-bit only)
 
-You can find the latest ARM Member Build here:
+ARM's customers should use the latest ARM Member Build here:
 
 * "http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk":http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk
 
diff --git a/android/images/vexpress-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt b/android/images/vexpress-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
index a425e08..cef9f51 100644
--- a/android/images/vexpress-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
+++ b/android/images/vexpress-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
@@ -1,9 +1,11 @@
 h1. Linaro Stable Kernel (LSK) Engineering Build for Versatile Express (Android)
 
-You can find the latest ARM Member Build here:
+ARM's customers should use the latest ARM Member Build here:
 
 * "http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/android/images/vexpress-lsk":http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/android/images/vexpress-lsk
 
+ARM Member Builds capture the latest content and information at that ARM wishes to present to it's partners and users.  The Member Build contains a more complete set of release notes, installation and build instructions.
+
 p. The Linaro Stable Kernel (LSK) is produced, validated and released by Linaro and is based on the linux stable kernel tree.
 
 p. Linaro releases monthly binary images for the ARM "Versatile Express":http://www.arm.com/products/tools/development-boards/versatile-express/index.php including support for Cortex-A9, Cortex-A5, TC2 (big.LITTLE) CoreTiles and Fast Models.
diff --git a/openembedded/juno-lsk/README.textile b/openembedded/juno-lsk/README.textile
index 1e677e2..ca11bce 100644
--- a/openembedded/juno-lsk/README.textile
+++ b/openembedded/juno-lsk/README.textile
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 h2. Linaro OpenEmbedded Engineering Build for Juno
 
-You can find the latest ARM Member Build here:
+ARM's customers should use the latest ARM Member Build here:
 
 * "http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/openembedded/juno-lsk":http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/openembedded/juno-lsk
 
diff --git a/openembedded/vexpress-lsk/README.textile b/openembedded/vexpress-lsk/README.textile
index bd0a6ef..d9fb38d 100644
--- a/openembedded/vexpress-lsk/README.textile
+++ b/openembedded/vexpress-lsk/README.textile
@@ -1,9 +1,11 @@
 h1. Linaro Stable Kernel (LSK) Engineering Build for Versatile Express (OpenEmbedded)
 
-You can find the latest ARM Member Build here:
+ARM's customers should use the latest ARM Member Build here:
 
 * "http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/openembedded/vexpress-lsk":http://releases.linaro.org/latest/members/arm/openembedded/vexpress-lsk
 
+ARM Member Builds capture the latest content and information at that ARM wishes to present to it's partners and users.  The Member Build contains a more complete set of release notes, installation and build instructions.
+
 p. The Linaro Stable Kernel (LSK) is produced, validated and released by Linaro and is based on the linux stable kernel tree.
 
 p. Linaro releases monthly binary images for the ARM "Versatile Express":http://www.arm.com/products/tools/development-boards/versatile-express/index.php including support for Cortex-A9, Cortex-A5, TC2 (big.LITTLE) CoreTiles and Fast Models.